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Hey everyone, sorry that it took me so long to post chapter 2. My Internet has been on the fritz so it has been very hard to post. If you ...

Yay! You remembered to PM me, thank you! This was really good, I like that we get more information on what is happening in the present. Her parents are a ...

I really like it!!! Sorry, I can't really get into it now but I really love it. Your plot is AMAZING and you have some great phrases in there. I ...

Hm, I liked your writing style, the way you described things. Unfortunately I didn't like your story. I am really sorry, it just didn't capture me. Now, before you go ...

Good part two! I really enjoyed reading it, the way you described everything was great! Not that much to say really, I liked it all! Sorry that this isn't a ...

Why do you do this? Well in any case I loved it. I thought that it sounds interesting and I am a total sap for gooey love stories. You have ...

Yay, 12th chapter! This was a very good chapter, I didn't have a problem with your lack of romance. I thought the interactions between Carmen and Nora were plenty. :lol: ...

This was hands down, a fantastic story. I really enjoyed the change of pace, everyone always talks about how great love is (myself included) so it was nice to read ...

shelbell: Thank you so much! I will make sure to work on those two things. Of course I will PM you, I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Vampy_Girl15: ...

Wow! That was really good! Your detail and imagery is amazing! I felt like I was there. I want to know what happens! Please continue with this story! I can ...

I liked this story a lot! It was short and very romantic. I liked how you mixed the lyrics in with the plot line, it was very well done. The ...

Writing for love is a pas: Thank you so much!!! I am planning on writing more, this is only the beginning of a long chapter of my life :lol: Lilith: ...

Hey everyone, I wrote this based on my actual life. So, yes it is true but I thought it belonged here. I know this is short but it is only ...

I was so happy to read your third chapter. :D This is all getting very exciting. Once again I have been beat to the grammar mistakes so I will not ...

I am too late to point out grammar mistakes and things of the sort so all that is left for me to say is good job! I liked it a ...