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Am I the only one who is actually out searching the streets for this bucket?

didn't make any sense. What did the beers thing at the end have anything to do with sunrises in the east and changing friendships? My favorite lines were the first ...

It was ok, a little confusing and a bit too repetitive (why did you have to say "did I mention people stare"? It didn't add anything to the poem). It ...

I don't think I can take another lie. I'm filled to the brim and Spilling. Over.

Unwilling to leave, Yet unable to stay. This is the predicament, I find myself in today.

There was some definetly good imagery and description in this poem, and I really enjoyed the first three stanzas. However, the last line just threw things out of whack. To ...

I recommend you change a LOT of this (see lyrics below to see how much you need to change), seeing as they're lyrics from "Someday You Will Be Loved" by ...

3/10. Sorry, it just bugs me when people quote themselves...

Emily turns to the other Emily(Onceuponatim3xo) and smiles apologetically. "It happens all the time to me too, this is the first time it's been for me in awhile!" Emily calls ...

Could you not pick up on the sarcasm?

Could you be any more ambiguous?

Nice My Favorite Highway quote (they live in my town =P) but I will also have to ask you to space it out please.

Hekategirl, did you know I officially love your name?

How on earth would we know that when you never mentioned it before now?

I note the lacking of your love Pulls tautly at the seams of mine, Unraveling my woven dream Of something that I couldn't find. Your wayward way of walking home, ...