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Ever try getting a job?

Maybe it's a dream...or maybe it's a nightmare I don't no how to take it in It's hard to see the ones I hold near slip away Do you no ...

i'm alone and i don't want to be. [so what are you gonna do about it?] i hate it. i'm alone and i want to go home. [well that's nice ...

Hmmm... I just read another one of your poems, and I liked your other one better. This seems a little...grade school. Let me elaborate: in school you learn how to ...

I read poetry because I write poetry, and I write poetry because I read it. Basically poetry itself is like a whole separate emotion, and it's nice sometimes to find ...

Alright, first things first, welcome to YWS! You may want to check out the rules and regulations, because one of them is you have to maintain a 2:1 ratio of ...

This has RHYME SCHEME written all over it. When writing a rhyming poem that should never be the case. The rhyme needs to sort of sneak up on you, and ...

....If calculating the circumference and diameter of your pie makes you a nerd, well that makes me a nerd. In my defense, I had to for Algebra 2 (my teacher ...

The poem was cliche and original but not half bad try to work on grammar and punctionuation I think you meant "punctuation"? And how could it be both original and ...

Um, I think she's gone, therefore we can close this thread maybe?

Thanks for the comments! yoyo- I fixed the type-o I had in there, its supposed to be a play on "dot my i's and cross my t's" with i's being ...

I look at my reflection in the mirror and it weeps though I do not.

My brother has a gun I don't know why He sais its for protection I know he is lieing I went to school one morning Thinking it was a regular ...

Someone who likes to write fairy tales about pink ponies and princesses (and who doesn't really value grammar or spelling....sorry but thats what it looks like, with the 3 for ...

"I can't tell..." Emily shouts back, a bit put off by adna's behavior, but entirely enthusiastic about the Beatles, her all time favorite band of ever in the history of ...