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Simon and Garfunkle? Bright Eyes? The Decemberists???? Yes!!!!

First of all, thanks for welcoming me. Props. Secondly, am i being forced to comment on other people's pieces? I can see for my first post that I should maybe ...

Hmmmm.... It's not the rhyming I mind so much as the rhythm. A lot of places were kind of awkward and didn't flow at all. In particular: When he slammed ...

16. If you get less then favorable reviews, simply assume that it's because no one understands you and isn't a true artist like yourself. You're probably right, no one else ...

Maybe writing isn`t your thing, this wasn`t intertaining at all, get some experiance and try again:) Don't listen to her. I really liked it actually. It was rather sad, but ...

that was extremely well done, although to those who aren't very deep, they may not understand it which is why a person has said "I don't like it" because she ...

I hate the way you talk to me, and the way you cut your hair. I hate the way you drive my car, I hate it when you stare. I ...

Barricade-Stars

Thanks for that! Anna is a vampire. She was turned against her will by a man she thought she loved, whose name was Simon Rambaldi. Her mother was taken from ...

First I must say, to all those that are comfused about why Ethan's wet and cold, the author clearly mentions in the chapter before this that Ethan had to walk ...

Haha, this guy in some ways like one of my gay friends, actually :D I disagree completely with whoever said the thing about pussy was something a gay guy wouldn't ...

I agree with Cade in a lot of ways. I didn't come away from this poem with anything that I didn't already know from what I've been hearing from adults ...

You definetly started out really strong, with a lot of good imagery and some great buildup. I expected a novel, almost, from your beginning paragraph or so. It just seemed ...

...but I know it still needs work, so that's why I brought it here! :D) Flying down the freeway Just the air reducing us to one volume Singing through the ...

This story reads like you were telling someone the story and this is the manuscrpit of what you said to them. You use phrases like "this festival thing", which sounds ...