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Hey Suze! Would you ming looking at this? I'd still like to improve it...

Ugh...just not feeling it today.... NOTE: THIS POEM IS RATED PG-13 Day #5 Electricity is palpable The air ignites, as the music rattles their rib cages The world is on ...

A poem, perchance?

It's from awhile ago, but I need something to work on, and I actually liked this idea. Go ahead, go nuts :)

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Alright, so I just came from reading another poem of yours, thought I'd see what else you got =P I like this one better than the other one I just ...

Ah, you have the ever-popular Hendrix quote in your sig, God ;) Anyways, on to your poem: Wandering, Wandering I agree with Suzanne about the repetition. I just don't think ...

Thanks Trident for the input! Now for today's poem (here it's still Friday! Half an hour to go!) and I just watched Almost Famous. If you haven't seen that movie ...

One day I walked into a wall I started to feel rather small My nose (the one on my face) Broke all over the place. Ouch.

I like the ideas I had the first day and today....obviously they both are going to need some work, but like NaNo, I'm doing all my editing in May.

Thanks Leja for commenting on my poems so far. Rest assured in May I'll take time to edit the ones that are worth editing. Hopefully this one is a little ...

Thanks! Now for Day 2....I almost don't want to post this, but I feel I must at the same time.... Day #2 Sometimes the trees all hold their breath At ...

Day #1 Bubbles make us feel abandoned Winds that hold false promises Stir the weeds and soap dust That cling like magic to every twig. Oh, how lucky are the ...

I didn't even know today started NaPoWriMo but randomly I went outside, sat for awhile, and wrote a few poems. Nature has just always inspired me, maybe it will inspire ...

Oh I'm so in :D I've been in a slump, hopefully this'll pull me out