olivia1987uk

Just leaving a quick message so i can find this easily tomoro cos its too late to do a decent review now...promise to come back to it tomorrow!

Lol, its ok, we're all here to help! I'd be really interested in reading the proper chapter you've written cos I like the way I think it's going! Feel free ...

Cheers for the reviews you two...I dunno what to do about it flowing from one person to the other with this only being the prologue...it'll be different when I get ...

Yeah blame me! Lol! I don't wanna work on my own novel now and it's all your fault! Like I said before...if you need any help, I have so many ...

Another Favorite of mine was Change of Heart, merely for it's beautiful representation of holy acts. I completely agree with you on this count my dear....I'm not a religious person ...

Thank you alwaysawriter! I have taken the time to think over your ideas and just wanna thank you for spending the time on it for me...means a lot! I'll be ...

i know there's some stupid mistakes so i apologise lol, didnt check it before i posted it cos i'm so lazy zzz

I'm really liking the narrative style in this! It draws you in so quickly with the amount of character description and the dialogue is beautifully colloquial and is doing a ...