olivia1987uk

I'm reading the fifth book in the Logan family series by Virginia Andews..the book is called Olivia and that's my name if you hadn't already guessed! Lol!

At last! Some romantic fiction for me to critique! I've been waiting for something new for a while now so thanks for posting! Since you're new, I'd just like to ...

Hey Andrew, your biggest fan is here again... Although I think this is beautifully written like the rest of your pieces, I don't quite think it has the same emotive ...

Thanks for your entry...it's the first one I've received...obviously I can't post a review myself...

This is the type of thing I am looking for for my contst >>>> Obviously I'm not entering it myself, but I wanted to post my idea anyway! The song ...

Hi Jared! Liked the overall feel of this piece and am looking forward to reading more but there are a few things to comment on so here goes!!! “Edward Pastor, ...

Hi! Thanks for your PM and of course I'll review things...I love to review...I must warn you that poetry isn't particularly my strong point but I will give it a ...

Hi seems I have timed this just right since you have just edited it! She watched, mesmerized, as the sky darkened as if a sudden black blanket was thrown over ...

Sorry it took me so long to get here! It's been a bit busy round these parts! Lol! I'm here now so here's what I think of your really good ...

Too short my dear! You can't have a short paragraph as a whole chapter...well you can...but I just don't like it! Lol! At least I'm honest! You're punctuation is lacking ...

Woah! I'm not even going to review this until it's set out properly (new speaker new line)and posted in two sections as it is massively long! Just a tip for ...

I liked this, a lot in fact....Really got a feel for the characters and wanted to whack Brannon one for being such a **** lol! I'm really glad Lucy stood ...

I'm afraid I have to ignore everything in your review...there isn't a word missing in the line you pointed out and the spelling errors you corrected are the English spelling ...

Nice piece with lots of fantastic detail but the lack of punctuation and ridiculously long sentences made it so hard to read. I had to really concentrate and it was ...

This is a bit arty farty in its content for me to actually enjoy reading such a piece but this is just personal opinion. All things considered....I was very shocked ...