olivia1987uk

Hey! Here's my review! The bitch was about to get what she deserved. His cold, and clammy hands reached towards her. Quickly, she stepped to the side. Tentatively asking, “What’s ...

It's very intriguing...yet maybe I need more of it to be able to judge sufficiently! The only thing I could possibly say is that I have read numerous pieces of ...

Hey! As far as I'm concerned, this just piece just keeps getting better and better! Although, the chapters are rather short....Have you considered contacting some agents about this? I'd seriously ...

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Hi Ashley...sorry it's taken me so long to get here but at least I'm here now! I have at my side a glass of milk and a bar of fruit ...

How about it? Lol, hope you don't mind critiquing this for me!

Can I be first on your list with this romantic fiction piece? Thanks!

It's a romantic fiction piece, hope you don't is the third part of the first chapter. so hopefully you'll look at the others too

It's a romantic fiction piece...hope you don't mind!

Jamie The packet of frozen peas stung his face, despite the tea towel separating it from his purpling skin. He could hardly blame his father for reacting that way. Now ...

I'm keen on this piece but I am still a little troubled about her name being make it more believeable you need to seriously add to the bit about her ...

From what I can gather your character has problems and because it is a letter and not direct prose there is no point commenting on grammar and stuff. I love ...

I really did like this piece and spotted no miatakes....there were a couple of occasions where you could have sused a semicolon as opposed to a comma but in the ...

Hi! Can I Just say, he hasn't killed BECAUSE he has autism...he has killed AND he has autism...there's a difference!

Quick quick quick! I have to get this done before The X Factor starts....very excited! Lol! I have fifteen mins for this review so hope I do it justice...if not ...