olivia1987uk

I'm here...feel kind of honoured that I've been especially requested! Get me! Hahaha! No mistakes as far as I can see so nothing to "critique" as such on my part...other ...

Lol, I love it when I'm right! Yay! hehe xx

Hey! Welcome to YWS! There are a few rules here and really, before you post you work, you should have done two reviews and try to keep the ratio at ...

I'm with ya, just give me some info!

I love it, but like we both said, not point in critiquing it properly as such! You have a really interesting life and your take on it is what I ...

I didn't find it boring at all...far from it! I think it's because I knew it was a diary entry when I started reading it....therefore i wasn't expecting it to ...

Hey I know you said you didn't need a crit but I am gonna say i really enjoyed reading it! There weren't mistakes as such, but I did notice a ...

Argh! If I hear these names once more I think I will scream! If I were you, I would change them just so people take your piece more seriously! his ...

I have to say I'm not keen on some of the ways you've phrased certain things. It seems, in your bid to be colloquial, you've lost some sincerity and the ...

The names really amuse me...I just keep saying "Quennel" to myself. It truly has a great sound...pointless message, sorry

I'm a bit behind the times here as I've been away because it was my 21st birthday! Woo! Happy birthday me! You've hd some excellent reviews. Very thorough and concise ...

Hey sezpez...I've only read the first paragraph...I'm going to reand and review bit by bit so bear with me if I sound confused...itll all become clear in the end hopefully...I ...

Hi! As you're new I just want to say welcome to YWS! We do have a few rules here, and it would be great if you can keep your review ...

I most definitely liked it! Probably didn't stress it enough. I really was captivated by the beginning, honestly! It drew me in hook, line and sinker and it is so ...

The first three lines got me hooked straight away...the fact you can do that shows what a good piece this could be...really hope you will be carrying on with this! ...