olivia1987uk

You've done really well on this and I'm certainly not surprised you got a good grade for this piece... I'm quite interested in what literary magazine you're thinking of submitting ...

Hello again! I told you I would be back! Hehehehe! There's a few minor errors in here in terms of capitalisation missing every now and again and whatnot but you're ...

Hi Joshuapaul... I'm going to read the first chapter straight away so I promise to give you my comments on that as well... The tense worries me...he "wondered" but now ...

Hi! Nice to meet you as a new member! Hope you stick around long enough for us all to get to know each other a little better! I didn't think ...

I'll do a proper review later as I haven't got time to give it the credit it deserves at the mo... You know I love your writing... Thanks for letting ...

I miss NaNoWriMo....lol...the year goes so slowly until it gets here!

I like this...a lot. I'd be really interested to see other entries for this two. You managed to grab and hold my attention and although this should be relatively easy ...

I don't like how quiet it's gone on here recently! Do you reckon between us we can do some sort of recruitment drive? Especially with people who are still at ...

I also felt the lack of punctuation took away from the flow of the seemed stunted and unfinished without the professionality you'd find from capitalisation and what have you.... The ...

Dougie joked, placing his pen down and pushing the leaflets into the centre of the circle table we were both sitting at. Circular table..... I didn’t really have any friends ...

I often find the best way to review someone's work in terms of grammar, particularly to read it aloud. I did this with your piece and found myself struggling. There ...

Oooooooooohhhhhh! Much better! I really liked this...the spelling errors and minor grammatical errors seemed to take away from the flow of the story and to be honest, were quite distracting. ...

Can it not just be a statement in a colloquial piece of writing? I know what you mean, and I do agree it isn't correct. But shouldn't writing have some ...

I'll write this is in the quick reply box before I forget what I wanted to say...Lily's first comment isn't actually right...both ways of phrasing convey the same meaning and ...

Hello again! Long time no see! Hehe, i kind of meant that there are a few typos throughout the piece and i think if you re read it you would ...