olivia1987uk

Lol, yes it did make me laugh! I am that daft too...welcome to my world! Hehe! Just to let you know, I make suggestions not corrections...feel free to tell me ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Don't know whethe anyone has told you but the rules on this site say that you are supposed to have posted two reviews before you submit ...

1 The amount of calories that would be burned in getting up, getting showered, getting dressed and walking to the lecture failed to entice her to open the curtains. Petra ...

I'm slowly becoming a big fan of yours young man! I noticed one typo but I can't remember where it was and I'm not in the mood to go searching ...

Thanks! There's loads there!!!!!!!!! Lol! Will have a proper look and get back to you! Olivia xxx

Completely agree with jasmine...can't see anything else to comment on really. Not usually a piece I'd read but the description was phenomenal. I do think you've captured the essence of ...

Hey! Really enjoyed this piece! Very glad I clicked on it randomly.... Can't really see any mistakes but then again, I was enjoying reading it so wasn't looking at it ...

Hehe, I always have problems with this type of thing as I'm English. A friend suggested I write a list of American-English words so I don't forget. It's quite big. ...

Yeah jumper and sweater are exactly the same things I think.... What's that word in teen films...retainer? Whats that all about? Lol Olivia xxx

You see, I am blind. Just a couple of nit pick things really...I think the whole thing would be a lot more interesting and thought provoking if you leave this ...

1 The amount of calories that would be burned in getting up, getting showered, getting dressed and walking to the lecture failed to entice her to open the curtains. Petra ...

Yeah blame me! Lol! I don't wanna work on my own novel now and it's all your fault! Like I said before...if you need any help, I have so many ...

As a massive RENT fan I just had to click on it as soon as I laid eyes on the title... I actually said to my mum, "I hope this ...

I say jumper!!!!!!!!!!! xxx

Hey Mallory! So glad you've joined! I like the older writers coming in here (18+) but love the younger ones too! I like to observe people, and I wouldn't call ...