olivia1987uk

As usual very very nice! You don't need to pretend the PM never happened! You have such insight Andrew, seriously! The title is very intriguing and the colloquial style of ...

I'm fed up of complimenting your work young man but I feel it is too good to simply overlook it! You have such a way of portraying such emotion it's ...

I like the idea of this and I can see what you mean about it being addictive to write. There are so many ways you could go with it and ...

There is nothing I specifically did not like about this piece although I agree with a few of the comments other people had made in their reviews...I won't reiterate them ...

Mother She never thought she would be in this position. Do children not learn from their parents’ mistakes? Did Kerry not learn from her own mother? She dabbed a makeup ...

I do love this and can't really pick fault with i other than the fact that it ended! Are you intending carrying this on or is this it? Either way ...

Right, I am back, as promised! :D Felt bad for not being able to do it last night but I knew I'd have been conked out face down on my ...

Just leaving a quick message so i can find this easily tomoro cos its too late to do a decent review now...promise to come back to it tomorrow!

Lol, its ok, we're all here to help! I'd be really interested in reading the proper chapter you've written cos I like the way I think it's going! Feel free ...

“It’ll be okay Don,” I replied, trying my best to comfort. I would say "trying my best to comfort her "...just flows better in my opinion she breathed, more to ...

It's a very intriguing prologue, I must say....Really got me hooked and I hope you post more soon...spotted a couple of minor things but nothing major needs a change as ...

Cheers for the reviews you two...I dunno what to do about it flowing from one person to the other with this only being the prologue...it'll be different when I get ...

*Prologue* She closed her eyes and let her knuckles knock on the door, not sure what to expect. Kerry was a mother, a mother who had just found out her ...

I like your idea...but to me the whole thing seemed extremely rushed and the spacing very annoying but that might just be me... If it was my story I'd bulk ...

I like this and would be interested to read more of it! Just a few suggestions though... I lived in the present day only-to be more specific the present party ...