olivia1987uk

Thanks for your comments! I will be carrying on with this, hopefully with a little help from my friend....I'm going to write a section from Corinna's point of view as ...

Lol, i liked the sentiment about this and I think the two previous reviewers have picked out everything I would have done... My only problem is, would such a girl ...

Good piece overall, quite enjoyed it! Get me branching out into poetry and science fiction today! Lol...just a few pointers She took out her own sword, which was much heavier ...

Love the emotion behind this! Kudos to you because I'm not usually a poetry person but the more time I spend in this forum the more I'm being converted... I ...

See, I have read a lot about suicide lately, but this definitely has the edge on everything else in my humble opinion... I did notice one little spelling mistake though...let ...

Her hair is the colour of Autumn. I never thought this would be possible, as Autumn has so many colours. You kind of have to see it to believe it. ...

Very nice! I rarely read the poetry on here as I tend to stick to my romantic fiction but I think this is lovely! It's made me want a little ...

Writing can stem from anything, no matter how bad you think the prompt is! But anyway, I like the idea...I bet most people would think of writing it from the ...

Not a bad piece at all...not something I'd usually enjoy reading but I can appreciate how well written it is.... just noticed the odd thing Joyous light, it blinds my ...

I'm in a real "imagery mood" at the moment and this was just the thing to read under the circumstances. I love descriptive pieces! They are my favourite kind and ...

Wow, I'm Olivia too! What are the chances! Haha! The other Olivia seems to have picked out what I would have commented on but I have to say I liked ...

This is why I love you! Lol! The things I wanted to sayve already been said as per usual! I need to speed up me thinks! But yeah, Andrew, you're ...

Well done for this piece...Bittersweet picked up on all the problems I noticed in terms of grammar and whatnot so all that it is left for me to do is ...

Not that I didn't love the first version (because, lets be honest, my other review kind of gave that away), but this is a lot better. I love your imagery. ...

Hey, I like you're writing style and I'm really glad you've joined YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, there are a few suggestions I am going to make about ...