olivia1987uk

Hey! I hope you end up osting every single day, even if they are half as good as this... It's not something I would usually choose to read but chocoholic ...

Hey! I kind of agree wth my fellow instructor and friend on this one :wink: If it's your first story then I can't wait to see what you come outwith ...

Oh how frustrating! A really good piece that my fellow instructors have jumped all over first so I can't review it properly without repeating what they've said! Gutted! But anyway, ...

Very nice chapter three but I have to say I do frefer chapter 3... everything i would have otherwise picked up on hs ben covered so kudos to the other ...

Hey Really liked chapter 2...preferred it to chapter one but I did find one typing error that noone else seems to have picked up on! Ann and the other girl ...

Hey! Really liked this chapter. It really hooked me...got me captivated some might say... There's nothing particularly to critique because it seems grammatically sound and stuff...nothing particularly

Thank you! I very much appreciate it! If you want anything reviewed give me a pm or write in my "Let me review section"

thanks!

If you wouldn't mind....

thanking you muchly

I'm back and bugging you again Clo! Cheers me dears

Hey thevoiceinside! I have to say i really enjoyed reading this, thoght I think i'd much prefer hearing it since it has a song! You can't judge the rhyme or ...

Hey! “Wake up, Miss Smith.” The house help knocked on her door. “Five more minutes,” she groaned turning as the house help knocked the door again. “Miss Smith, it’s almost ...

You can rant via poetry if you so should wish my dear! I do agree that maybe you could double some of the lines up so there are words on ...

No problem my dear....give me a shout if you want a helping hand!