olivia1987uk

Although I love cliff-hangers, this seemed a bit cliche... It may be better to keep this a secret for a while....hinting at it but never quite revealing it.... I love ...

You are the lucky individal that gets my 100th review! How special do you feel? Very, hopefully.... New anxiety welled up in her. I'd say....New anxiety welled up inside her... ...

I'm really not sure about this piece...I've started to think that maybe I'm just being a bit slow on the update! It's completely gone over my head I'm terms of ...

Hey fellow instructor I didn't notice any good stuff It must definitely makes me want to read it though, so you've hit both of your objectives in my humble opinion! ...

This is quite amusing...a light read is nice every so often, don't ya think? If M.Girard wasn't such an inconsistent push-over of a teacher, the kids in the class wouldn't ...

Hey hey hey meep(: I liked this piece a lot, so this comment is just to express that really... You have had some very competent people reviewing it for you ...

I know what you mean, my dear, about your stuff just being more of the same...but hey...if it aint broke, don't fix it...I've told you before on many occasions I ...

Back, sorry about that! This my favorite room in my grandmother’s house. Possibly my favorite room any where. I'd replace the full stop in between these two sentences with a ...

Never fear! Olivia1987uk is here! With bells on and far too much enthusiasm....but anyway...here's my critique! “I call dad’s old room!” I'd leave this is a stand alone statement and ...

Good one! Kudos to you my dear! Must be a UK thing, lol! But anyway, just when I was getting bored of the monotony of reading teenage romance after teenage ...

Good one! Kudos to you my dear! Must be a UK thing, lol! But anyway, just when I was getting bored of the monotony of reading teenage romance after teenage ...

All I keep reading today are predictable storylines!!!! Lol, not impressed! This didn't have much to recommend it I'm afraid... It lacked any character definition, description, emotive language...the

Hey KailaMarie Not too sure on this piece, although i do like your writing style...let me explain why... The late summer sun filtered through the red checkered curtains as I ...

Hey Billy... You've obviously already edited this judging by the other review before mine so I'm just going to nit pick...hope you don't mind :wink: Her long-lashed eyes fluttered open, ...

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