olivia1987uk

I like the fact that I could apply this to my own situation and emotions and then just as easily apply it to the lady that lives next door, for ...

I get the feeling that this hasn't been proof read. Silly spelling mistakes and whatever make it really difficult to give a blow by blow review as I feel I'd ...

Hmmmm, this seems to me to be more like an exerpt than a stand alone piece. Is this the case? It's odd, in a good way. I decided to read ...

It will be edited dear, was written in 10 mins inbetween uni work and I have a feeling it'll be a full novel so I don't need to cram it ...

[i] Sometimes, trying to find originality is like trying to find a needle in a haystack; or a four leaf clover. To be original was not the main objective of ...

Hi! I really like the way you write. Your grammar is excellent although you do have a tendancy to go "semi-colon happy"! Lol, I do it too!! Only a couple ...

Dear Mum, I want to cancel my birthday party. There is nothing to celebrate. Can I ask for money instead of presents? That way I can get what I need ...

I'm baaaaack and I have to say quite impresseed with some of the new people. keep up the good work everyone. I'm keen to get back in with my reviews ...

Pretty please :) Don't need a full review as its not more than a few paragraphs...just want to know if its worth carrying on with :)

I think karsten has summed this up brilliantly :) the repetition does take away from the decent writing style which obviously is a great shame. I do have another point ...

I'm convinced I'm repeating what all above have said but the colloquial language and phrasing is very endearing. Reminds of someones writing but I can't for the life of me ...

Just wanted to know if this was worth carrying on for the purpose of aquamarine's contest... :elephant: For the last three hours Kate had sat looking at the green velvet ...

I'm in complete agreement with the above review...Opaque is the perfect way to describe it, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. The writing was excellent as far as I ...

I love the simplicity of this. That's probably down to the ease of which you write, or at least that's the impression I get :) You're writing flows well and ...