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Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1
Hey there, wordwing! This story seems excellent. I do have to suggest to you that you should work on your dialogue a little more. For example, why don't you change ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Six Word Sadness
I really enjoy your writing style. However, I feel as if you're missing a little bit of stuff. You need something to bring your story. I highly suggest that you ...
Oct 13, 2017
