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Re: Cage
Hello! To get started, I just want to put a general statement out there by saying this is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it, and I even started to think of ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Why Nice Guys Finish Last
Well spoken, truly. It's the harsh truth we all seem to face, but no one seems to understand enough to quit pursuing the "asshole". So do you see the problem ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Letter To Her Lover
Thank you for the input, both of you! I wouldn't have caught it otherwise. I went in and changed it. I think I was just typing so quick, and reading ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Ode to a Bat
This is wonderful, I love it! Your last two lines are the ones that stuck out the most to me, and are pretty much my favorite lines. I really loved ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Letter To Her Lover
To My Dearest Lover, How are you making out? Are your ambitions reached yet, or am I still weighing you down? Did you see all that you wanted to see? ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Brothers
I just wanted to state, that I think I really love this poem. The way you describe everything, the words you chose, the way you write. Just everything about it, ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
Thank you all so much ! Ghee, in all honesty this means a lot! I was never confident in my work at all, because it seems anyone with a camera ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Dreamland.
Hi there! I have some good and some bad to say about this poem, but to start off on the right foot, I did enjoy reading this! First off, I ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Capture a moment, capture a smile.
Aw! That's adorable! And such a nice photo also! It's very crisp and a good quality image. Such a sweet idea! I normally just leave notes in books in bookstores. ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Sinking
I really enjoyed reading this! Not only was the message it was trying to get across clear, and the emotion was felt (at least for me) as well. I don't ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
Since I'm quite new here, I decided that along with my writing, I'd share some of my photographs also. I'd appreciate all and any type of feedback, thank you! Street ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Shipwrecked Love
I saw the title and expected some long-drawn out poem... But, when I read what you wrote here, I was impressed! Your simplicity here is beautiful, and I love the ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Your Brother...
To start off, I just wanted to say the entire time I read this I had a little smirk on my face the whole time, because to me I found ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
Hi! I do enjoy the blunt honesty that you have going on in your writing. I also enjoy that you basically covered a simple human emotion that most of us ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: One.
(This is my first post here, hi! I don't know how you guys work around here, but I just decided to post this to get some sort of feedback? I ...
Jul 4, 2011
