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Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]
I really liked this piece. I kept wanting to get to the end. In the good way, of course. I was disappointed when the end didn't get to the date. ...
May 30, 2005 -
Re: Believe It - Prologue
This writing is good. The sentence structure, etc. But the story went really, really slowly. It didn't go anywhere. Basically, it was boring. The only thing that made me want ...
May 30, 2005 -
Re: What's in your CD player?
The Mars Volta-Francis the Mute. That's just a kick-ass album. But you have to listen to it actively, all the way through to truly enjoy it.
May 25, 2005 -
Re: Martial Artists
... You're kidding, right?
May 25, 2005 -
Re: anyone ever heard of head automatica?
I just googled 'em, and their pretty cool. I might have to check them out. The only thing I don't like is the lead singer's voice ...
May 25, 2005 -
Re: local dialect phrases/words
I've been saying "That's hot," since before I knew who Paris Hilton was. She didn't invent it. ... Not that I did, but she didn't either.
May 23, 2005 -
Re: person above ya!
^ is probably right.
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Maybe
Yeah, it sounds just like every other teenager-written song ever. It needs something else. It's to ... you know, "so what?" you could say. Again, it just sounds like everything ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: The Werewolf of LA
Okay, first of all, you really need to make your posts readable. It sounds like total jiberish when read aloud. Also, this is probably best fit in the "About the ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Star Wars fans i have thought of a new weapon.
All the vibro weapons are solids, though, like normal swords.
May 23, 2005 -
Re: POST MORE MATERIAL/CRIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree, this site is just getting too big. Yeah, I miss the old days, when there were just, like a few hundred people.
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Star Wars fans i have thought of a new weapon.
... So, it's like a like light saber , only it's a trident ... Well, how about the light axe , and the light halberd , and the light bow ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Music and influence
Yeah, I'm just puttin' in my two cents here. Music definitely influences feeling, but I think one would have to be pretty unstable to let lyrics get so much to ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: The Golden Strata: Chapter 1 /P
Aniar, you do realize that on the home page it said in big letters "DO NOT POINT OUT GRAMMATICAL ERRORS?" Just checking.
May 23, 2005 -
Re: The Golden Strata: Chapter 1 /P
This ... was really good. I could feel the emptiness of this planet. The intro was beautiful. It described this unfamiliar universe in such a way that it made me ...
May 23, 2005
