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Anything with violence, blood, guns, corruption, evil, explosions, fire, death, flesh-eating zombies, drugs, rotting corpses, and any otherwise bad, disgusting, illegal, terrible, corrupting things is

Well, technically it is freeverse, because not all of the stanzas have the same amount of lines. Freeverse poetry always has the same rhyme scheme in each stanza (for instance, ...

Yeah...WELCOME!!!!!!! Hey, niteowl, it's not fair that everyone else didn't get the new elephant emoticon!!! You should give everyone else one, too. Anyway, this was a good poem, and yes, ...

This is a nice piece. I think you should rephrase the last line in the fourth stanza. It just dosen't sound very poetic. Also, in the first stanza, you sort ...

It is an interesting story. It's kind of in that style that sounds like someone is actually telling it to you. I'll be looking forward to a continuation. Oh yeah, ...

This is a pretty interesting and creative story. If you revised it, and added on to it, then it would be better. There are some adjectives that need to be ...

Wow ... I'm not really sure how to respond to that. Um ... wow ... heh heh ... All I can really do is be thankful, I guess. Wow ... ...

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Yeah, no one really likes emotion_less. We're just nice to her cause she cries if we aren't. just kiddin' :P ...sort of...

It wasn't bad, but it could have been a whole lot better. You should focus on one character, instead of switching between points of view. Also when she killed him, ...

Well you know what I've told you about drugs!!! Share them with me!!! Geez!!! just kiddin' :wink:

Just as good as good as the last one! I still don't know when and where this is set, though. The part where Susannah and her parents were talkin' about ...

That's cute ... just kiddin' ...

Interesting. It did seem "dreamish." I didn't like the rhyme scheme. And by the way, niteowl will ussually be the first to tell you that those suck, but hey, I ...

Of course, one can use the Quran or the Torah, as they both are very closely related to the Bible. The Quran goes on further in time past the Bible.