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It was ... alright, at best. I mean, it was a good piece, but, it didn't really have anything special goin' for it, you know? I see what your saying, ...

Ok, I want a burning skull, with a snake slithering out of the left eye socket, a rose on the ground in front of the skull with a Strat and ...

My spring break's been over for almost a week now. Crap. School bloooooows !!!!!!

Shine a big light of the Batman sign in the sky so he'd come save me. What would you do if you woke up i Kentucky (provided you don't live ...

This isn't bad for a "try." It really wasn't bad at all. In the dialogue, especially near and at the end, I think it went a little to fast. I ...

I thought this was very good. In the second line, "gently" should be "gentle", shouldn't it? Also, in the fourth stanza, that "then", should be "than". The fifth stanza, in ...

They do have pretty interesting lyrics, but, you know, I just can't seem to get into their music. Ecspecially their vocalist. His voice is too ... ughthhangthgahhhhhh ... you know? ...

Thanks for the crit emotion_less. And geez, it's freakin' drama ... gosh ... you always have to analyze stuff ... it's so annoying ... I hate you ... just kidding ...

It's a good message, but it was put out too plainly. Think you should revise it and change the lines to have more poetic phrasing. Als you should make the ...

Not many stories can make me as sad as this. Well done. This was an interesting way to illustrate their life as lovers. I could tell that you had put ...

mmh... Interesting. I probably could have understood it a whole lot better had I known anything about computers (if this poem has anything to do about computers ... How stupid ...

I liked it, but, the writing could have been a little slower. It kind of seemed like it was like, "Oh, look, an angel, how ordinary. Oh, look they keep ...

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It is an inside joke. But there isn't much to get but the fact that it means "oh hello." Last year in Civics, me and my freind just got really ...

It means "oh Hello." Long story on how that was created, but that's a story for another day...