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Before I get to my crit, let me welcome you to YWS. "It rocks my face off!" I can tell that you're trying, but, it's really bland and plain. It ...

Mmmmmm ... symbolism cooling in the window ... I liked this a lot, but I think you should edit and fix the the typos. Iroy=Iron? Ivory? Tyranosaurus Rex? Trees are ...

Yeah, that's Shadow Knight, but he can also be called: SK Shade Cutey Pie Pootskooch Prof. Sparkles Bear Claw And I'm ohhewwo ... oh ... hello!

mmmmmmm ... pie ...

Wow. That was really good ... The only thing I have a problem with is the last line. It sounds more like an ending to an essay than a poem. ...

This was actually really, good. I say "actually," because I'm sure that someone's going to be totally phased by line six. But, that line may actually be a little too ...

...really, really short, this entry. But, actually, you've sort of got me hooked already, and I'm not sure why. But, keep going!!!

... that's different ... tryin' new things, huh?

Oh yeah and you should check out http://www.albinoblacksheep.com. Do you use flash or do you just watch it? its pretty difficult but sooo fun Albinoblacksheep rocks. *Schfifty Five* :D

Yeah, sometimes I wear it. No joke. I wore it at my bands last gig. It's kind of a rocker kind of thing, if strait guys do it. I also ...

This is a really creative, albiet a bit strange, piece. The finishing statement was haunting, just how I like it. One of the kind of lines I like to read ...

This was pretty well written well written. It didn't really particularly hit me in the face with wowness, if you know what I mean. But I got the statement. The ...

This is gonna get so incredibly and annoyingly out of hand that you'll kill yourself for posting that, The Black Rose. We did this in my creative writing class. It ...

If you can tell me how to put a picture on here, then I'd love to. But until then, I will commence to beat my computer with a baseball bat!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...

I are not needin' no speekin' help.