ohhewwo

Who Killed Tangerine?-Tears for Fears

What he's trying to say is that he feels misunderstood. Which he should after that.

Interesting And well written. The elipses may not be a good thing. I don't know if they flow well. But otherwise, well done.

I liked this a whole lot. Very well written. That's all I really have to say. :thumb:

I used to be into American comic books (Marvel kicks DC's ass!). But then my brother and I got into Manga. Good stuff. Naruto Neon Genesis Evangelion Shaman King The ...

Yeah, I think both Qi and Incandescence are both right. If it is true, then, hell yeah, "start a revolution!" But, if not, forget about it, and ... um ... ...

Yep, thats about it. Although ohhewwo could always be right. I can't believe thats what actually happened with you and Daniel. You had all the right reasons to delete your ...

This is undoutedly the best work you've written and posted here, in my oppinion. The only thing that I think needs work is the last stanza. With the blood and ...

If this is true, then it completely belongs in randomness. However, if this is supposed to be a real story, then it was still the most random thing I have ...

Yeah ... Us protectors sortof got jipped on the picture. Look at that and see what I'm talkin' about. I wanted a, sick, disturbed assassin ninja sword guy...

This was alright, but, you've really have got to make the font black. I'm seeing stripes everywhere. When she says the time, unless you meant that it was about 6:27, ...

Way too limerick-ish to me. Like, way too limerick-ish. I think this could have been so much better than it is. When I saw the title, I thought that It ...

This is a good piece. That's all I have to say. Keep writing.

Maybe this guy's a sci-fi writer that hates fantasy ... yeeeeaaah ...

I didn't understand this the first time I read it, but the second and third, I got it. This was pretty creative. I always like it when poets mess with ...