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Okay, we sound like the biggest geeks talking about this, but, hey, we are geeks at heart ... especially you ... just kidding ... or am I? I've got the ...

Worshiping idols as a Muslim (and I think in Hinduism) was banned long, LONG ago. I'm not sure about any other religions, though. I'm not Christian, so I may be ...

Trust me...you will. I'm working on this new story, but I'm going to wait until I get to atleast the 5th chapter before I start posting it. Well, in the ...

Jeez, y'all are so plain. There are, like, what, eleven pages of fantasy on this site. Jeez! So freakin' normal. Although, I do have three D&D hand books. I'm normal, ...

That's cool. I don't have any piercings, and I don't really want any. My brother's friend want's to get the skin, or it may be cartlage, between his thumb and ...

pfff, Muse. Muse vs. The String Cheese Incedent (oh yeah. Hippie jam music... 8) )

"Boulevard of Broken Dreams" - Green Day The easiest song I've ever played. Just ask Chevy/Morgan too. ... that's because it's freakin' GREENDAY, man. Most of their songs (especially the ...

This was really funny, and I enjoyed it a lot. I liked the format you chose. The four rhyming lines, then a short, blunt, unrhyming, funny line. I think that ...

It wasn't enough to get into, but I'll be sure to read your next entry of this. The first sentence of the prologue sounded too essay-y to me. I think ...

Wait ... so ... are you Chr- ... Re- ... I'm confused ... :-s :( :-s

Ahem, it's "Oh Hewwo, I didn't see you there "

Hey this is really good except you do need to consider that younger kids read the way where did you find that picture of rikku Black Rose??? 'scalled google.

Okay, this was semi-good. Lemme tell you why it was only semi -good. The beggining got my attention. The, after Jadyn woke up, it got boring. The story continued like ...

... yeah ... I think you can do away with the commas. They're just distractions and break up the piece really badly. This was good for what it was, but ...

It's definately better, but still lacking. It dosen't flow well. Ecspecially the part that says "The pressure is almost too much/to bear." It's a long(er than some) line, then a ...