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Haha. I liked this. It was funny. ... Alright, that's all I got.

I liked this piece. I especially liked the line in the last stanza describing the air.

Yeah, I liked it a lot, too. It was pretty well put together, for a free write. In the third to last sentence, you used the word "utter," twice. Be ...

Hey, I say it's just freakin' WalMart, and no one cares about WalMart!

DQ, did no one tell you about the YWS torture dungeon? Oops, never mind, I said nothing..... Nice going, Jack! You just gave it all away! That's great! That's just ...

This sounds really interesting. I want here more. The title sounds cool, too. The only thing I can suggest is that you divide that up into paragraphs. It gets a ...

I didn't really get into this. If more was available to me, I might, but it's not. But it's good that you didn't post too much at one time, as ...

I liked this a lot. Nice job! shards of broken daylight fling themselves across... This line was great!

Genesis (both before Phil Collins sung and after) Genesis vs. Wide Spread Panic (c'mon, Hippie Jam Music, pull through!)

I'm glad that you feel that way, DQ. Has anyone noticed that fimcanister, the person who started this thread, hasn't posted on it once since her first post.

All I can say to that is I hope that you're feeling better in the next few days. I'm not gonna judge Paris Hilton, just what I've seen of her, ...

Okay, I know this is sort of a disrepectful thing, but, I didn't read the whole thing, just the first paragraph. Indeed, you are correct sir. In my oppinion, only ...

Yeah, I have the same "Hitting instinct thing," but if a guy touches me and I know that they're not gonna hit me, I'll play along.

Yea, I'll let that one go. But don't let it happe again! :evil:

Heres where i have a problem, it seems like you think its totally ok to rip on wicca, the condemn it and make fun of it, but doing so to ...