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Yeah, that happens, but that's sort of what's supposed to happen in free writes. All of your ideas are supposed to go down without thought. You can't stop writing until ...

This is a really good poem. I could kind of tell what you were talking about the way you put it because it was kind of my style of poetry, ...

Yeah, it runs in my family. We run a gourmet road kill restaraunt.

Yeah, I have so many unfinished stories from my childhood, too.

Sometimes .... I kill pigeonsthere I said it! I admit it! I do sometimes kill pigeons, but only for survival purposes!

[quote="areida07"]Aww... I can't wait to be a mother! Well, not that I want to be anytime too soon... LOL... but the thought of carrying another life inside my body is ...

Lol! Well, I'm sure you won't want to hear this, but it depends on the girl. Personally, I like poetry, flowers, a guy who can make me laugh at his ...

Oh, yeah, welcome to YWS! It's fun here. And we are not zombies getting ready to take over the universe ... :twisted:

Wow, this was great. I don't know, it was just the way you wrote it that made it good. I'm not sure why it was so good, it just was. ...

This is better than "Changes," but it didn't knock me out or annything.

I've never seen much of your work here, so you've probably answered this question, like, one too many times, but, what kind of band are you in? Anyway, onwards to ...

Dude, you know that I started preaching that in, like, fourth grade, right? And then cooled it in about sixth grade. You need to find less common beliefs and motives ...

Bone Machine- The Pixies (from Surfer Rosa) "He bought me a soda/He bought me a soda/He bought me a soda/And he tried to molest me in the parkin' lot! yep ...

This was a really great piece. But I think the "sooo" can be cut into to just "so." If you want to put emphasis on it, then just italicise it.

Thanks, Snoink, this helped me a lot. Just one thing. Maybe I have been totally disillusioned by what a flaw is. I thought a flaw was a problem the person's ...