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thanks for posting, and i came up with it in 2min so i didn't expect it to be good but thanks for the critisism.

i loved the graphic nature it holds and how it describes lust...the only thing would be to again shorten the sentences...give the same expression in fewer words is what a ...

I may not be a princess With hair as great as gold I may not be a rich antique Which that of can be sold I may not have All ...

i love the dynamics of this poem and i think you present it very well. There is much emotion behind this poem. Man i sound like my teacher who picks ...

i actually enjoyed this poem and would have to disagree with some of the people because it is actual poetry and can be written in many forms. it was very ...