oceanwriter99

I think this is great! As in the first chapter you sort of moved quickly through the scene with the woods. I would have like to see you MC and ...

This is an astonishing piece of writing! I'm almost speechless. This is a story I would pick up and read for hours on end! Theres only a few things I ...

I think this is a really good concept, but I think you go through the scene very quickly. I got lost in some parts, you explain how you find only ...

Hi, I think this a really amazing piece of writing and that its the same type of writing I like to do sometimes also. This is something I would sit ...