oceanwriter99

Thanks everyone! :)

I use to love the water. I loved how it smelled, looked, and even felt. But that was then, this is now. And my feelings have changed. Because, when your ...

Okay, well I must say I agree with ALL of your comments. In my opinion I have to idea where this crazy story was even going. I think that because ...

Very interesting, and very dark and sinister sounding. I like the idea that I think your going for its just I think you should keep writing and explain the situation ...

Maryann woke up to the soft sound of rain hitting her bed room window. The sky out side was dark, cold, and sinister looking. She had a feeling that today ...

Maryann was walking to the near by Shop Mart, deciding whether or not she should get a new vacuum cleaner. Knowing her OCD would eventually take over her mind she ...

Hi! First off I love this! I think it's a great start to something. It's really a cliff hanger! It's something I would read and wonder 'What did this pour ...

First off this is a very interesting story, I like the idea and concept. Just a few things that don't make senses to me. First is your MC male or ...

Well hello, I really like the idea and concept that you have going on it's just toward the middle and end I got a little confused. "As the Spawn gotten ...

Maryann woke up to the soft sound of rain hitting her bed room window. The sky out side was dark, cold, and almost sinister looking. She had a feeling that ...

Maryann woke up to the soft sound of rain hitting her bed room window. The sky out side was dark, cold, and almost sinister looking. She had a feeling that ...

The water all around me was slashing into my face making it hard for me to see and breath. I held on desperately to a piece of floating wreckage I ...

Whoa! Really great, I didn't see to many mistakes or problems. I really like the idea! The end of it was INTENSE! I can also relate to the story and ...

4 “Get up! This isn’t no hotel!” Yelled a short man with an ugly face, he stood with the door to the wagon open and was begging to become impatient. ...

Thanks! That's all stuff that I will go over (the maid thing I thought I did but I guess I forgot to!) Haha thanks!