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Wow, I never realised smoke inhalation was that bad :O I wrote this section of the story when I was 15 and I'm currently editing it so I'll probably cut ...

Hiya, I was wondering if you could help shed some light on a possible problem in my novel. Okay, so one of my characters passes out from smoke inhalation but ...

@Rosendorn Well, I was just sitting around so I started trying to rewrite the first chapter in third chapter and I'm really happy with the result. I'll probably rejig the ...

@Rosendorn I suppose I could see how it goes changing to third person. If at all possible, if I posted the new version would you be able to review it? ...

@Rosendorn well, I do first person because I personally love it, I love the connection I get from my characters. I have the third person to add extra information and ...

@Mea Yeah, the third person's are important but at the same time they are secondary, the story could move along easily without them. The beta readers are a good idea, ...

@Mea Thank for your advice! ^_^ I have read the Bartimaeus trilogy but it's been soon long that I can't really remember it. Yeah, I could move the first chapter ...

I started writing Knowing Gods when I was 15 years old and as such my immature writing brain decided to change from third person to first person and back again. ...

BlueAfrica is so right about not waiting for the motivation, I could spend years waiting for mine. I have written at least a hundred words every day since the beginning ...

Well, so far I have written 2 fantasy novels and my favourite scene has to be in Knowing gods where I describe the Nevoo. It's a massive tree in a ...

Hello, would anyone like to review my completed novel Knowing Gods: The Truth Will Set You Free. I have the first three chapters on here. It's a fantasy YA set ...