Young Writers Society

Wow, I never realised smoke inhalation was that bad :O I wrote this section of the story when I was 15 and I'm currently editing it so I'll probably cut ...

Hiya, I was wondering if you could help shed some light on a possible problem in my novel. Okay, so one of my characters passes out from smoke inhalation but ...

I finished reading a Cruel Prince by Holly Black yesterday. It's a first person, present tense book about a mortal girl named Jude who lives in the world of Faerie ...

I recently re-read The Mortal Instruments, and I was slightly disappointed by it after holding it such esteem for the past four years. I noticed things that didn't add up ...

@Rosendorn Well, I was just sitting around so I started trying to rewrite the first chapter in third chapter and I'm really happy with the result. I'll probably rejig the ...

@Rosendorn I suppose I could see how it goes changing to third person. If at all possible, if I posted the new version would you be able to review it? ...

Thank you so much, yeah it was really good :)

Yeah, that's fine ^_^

@Rosendorn well, I do first person because I personally love it, I love the connection I get from my characters. I have the third person to add extra information and ...

@Mea Yeah, the third person's are important but at the same time they are secondary, the story could move along easily without them. The beta readers are a good idea, ...

@Mea Thank for your advice! ^_^ I have read the Bartimaeus trilogy but it's been soon long that I can't really remember it. Yeah, I could move the first chapter ...

Hello Mage! Work: Knowing Gods- first chapter Link: Brief Description: Willow, Leah and Uri make their way to school but Uri disappears half way through only to be found hanging ...

I started writing Knowing Gods when I was 15 years old and as such my immature writing brain decided to change from third person to first person and back again. ...

BlueAfrica is so right about not waiting for the motivation, I could spend years waiting for mine. I have written at least a hundred words every day since the beginning ...

Type of work- Detailed digital work Description- The character I would like you to draw is Phoenix. She is from my fantasy series Knowing Gods and she is a demi-goddess ...