occasionalpessimist

Hey! I liked this. Even if I'm not into the torture-esque stuff. Even while the content was good, I have a problem: The paragraphs. They were humongously huge, and painful ...

if you don't have many things on your plate right now, can you please give me your opinion on this? I just want to know whether I should make a ...

Hi! Can you please, please, please review my story 'Just Another Day'? Just a general review, really. My grammar isn't that great, but that's something I *know* I have to ...

Flitwick isn't short and green, but never mind. :) Hi, Yoda! I'm one of the n00biest n00bies around YWS at this point in time. Evidence? This is my first post ...

Lovely poem. Really touching. I enjoyed reading it, but I still have a few things to point out. I'm not in a very nitpicky mood, so I'm not going to ...

I've seen that you tend to use light and dark very often, as points of comparison. Not that it's bad or anything, but actually quite effective. However... What happens when ...

So. This article is one of the funniest I've read that follows this perspective. Not just funny, but it set me thinking. I mean, I'm a transvestite, but I've never ...

There was something... poetic about this story, even if I couldn't understand what you were talking about. I loved the way you narrated it. You absolutely have to write more! ...

It’s still cold. It’s the 14th of July, but it’s a freezing 5 degrees C. I don’t how longer it can go on like this. The sky is always the ...