occasionalpessimist

There are very few mistakes in here, but they are extremely obvious, I'm afraid. I'm not in a nitpicky mood, but I'll just gloss over each. While you should avoid ...

I don't have any bribes except unlimited supplies of virtual cookies... so could you review this for me? Pweese? (Chapter One) (Chapter Two) Thanks ever so much in advance! - ...

I like this story. Even if I'm not usually a fan of romance. Even with the cliffhanger at the end, I'm not sure about what you've added to this chapter ...

Um, thank you for posting this. I can finally tell all my Farmville-addict friends that I'm a geek for the greater good. :D Honestly, what's so great about planting a ...

Kaito dropped soundlessly to his knees, all the better to inspect this strange creature. "I knew it," he whispered. "I knew aliens existed!" The grey creature didn't look very impressed. ...

Kaito dropped soundlessly to his knees, all the better to inspect this strange creature. "I knew it," he whispered. "I knew aliens existed!" The grey creature didn't look very impressed. ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I think there are many things that need to be cleard up. Like, what exactly is the Night of Dreams? Why is the world ...

Thanks! @Genesis a.k.a. maxlovesfang15: Yes, I have read the first and last books of Maximum Ride. I'm not very fond of the series, but it gave me the idea for ...

Can you review my story The Question? Link on my portfolio. Just a general thing, really. And thanks in advance! - Alexandra

Muharhar. Being your sister gives me full permission to char-grill your story. it was simply awesome, except for a few points I've highlighted below... There were two doors in the ...

This poem was simply amazing. i loved it. Do keep writing. And don't listen to whoever just posted above this, they don't know what they're talking about. This poem was ...

Turn 1: The First Whispers I walk the Silver City alone. The moonlight shimmers off the tall buildings, devoid of life and cold in their beauty. Everybody is asleep but ...

Ecclesiastic mumblings I liked your poem. It was... felt, I suppose. I've felt like that before. Retelling the stories everyone calls paroxysms :?: 'Paroxysms' are sudden outbursts of emotion. If ...

Thank you, Skins! And I do agree with what you said. I can see the mistakes. [frowns] I'm working on a novella version, with all those wonderful details. The first ...

Good point... even I'll stick with nerds. I liked this, though this is more neutral Humor article than a story, get what I mean? Keep writing! :) - Alexandra Merry ...