observandox

i really enjoyed reading your work, its a kind of piece that's easy to relate too, and the flow was effortless. in the shimmering lights I melt, For they stir ...

Hmm, well its a bit of a cliche, the use of words and how you used them. I like the idea behind them though. That is our crime: Our love ...

i can't help you with punctuation or grammar, but i did like your piece, its one that was easy to understand and it did flow. Hope shot down by lightning, ...

Even under a shit sky, if there ever was one If there ever is one to me, it didn't flow right. takes me back to those fat hot nights I'm ...

She hated anything that reminded her of who she was. because her tongue used to sting, it was the kind of poison that would swim deep through the skin, right ...