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On a side note the apostrophe is making some weird %u2019 thing in the reply window so thats not fault.

Another thing I should have detailed earlier before your review was that the italic parts were a flashback before and after universe 1 was hit by the solar flare. These ...

Vince thinks he has won as he doesnt think Sam from universe 1 who is in universe 2 Sams body survived. Of course this isn%u2019t the case as Sam stabilizes ...

Sam from universe 2 isnt stupid as he catches on what Vince is doing from security cameras and the extensive notes Vince takes about his trips. Sam from universe 2 ...

Now let%u2019s introduce Vince, a Trinity Testing scientist who quickly became friends with Sam from universe 2. Vince one day finds out what the machine is actually doing when he ...

What I tried to tell and sort of failed in telling was that in the story there are two universes coexisting side by side. In universe 1, Sam didnt follow ...

Thanks for the review. I thought about totally revising it earlier but I don%u2019t know. I think I should just gather what I%u2019ve learned from this and write something new. ...

Thanks

Thanks so much for reviewing my story! As a first attempt at writing a complete short story I think I did alright. I've edited it so hopefully with the added ...