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Re: The Rose Game
When I open my study door in the library there's a lavender rosebud greeting me by the door. I look out into the sea of books before I pick it ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Kiss me *freewrite*
I like it. But lkike the one above it seems like it has the possiblity to be considered run-on sentences. Just dividing them up would make them better. I agree ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Anything...
I like it!! I think that there are enough grammar nazi and crap picking this apart (no offence, of course) I didn't expect it much, I thought they did the ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Thirst, Part 1 (Revisions have occured!)
I like it!! It's good, not at all like Twilight (meh!! >.
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Death Note Parody
Oh my god that was great. Me and my brother are huge Death Note fans, and even he smiled at your writing. I especially liked the "fag" diss because it's ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter One
I like it. The only thing I would work on is that is sounds really...sharp. Like, technical almost. But since it's a vampire their minds are really calculating...but I like ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
...But can't poetry be dark and sad? Isn't that what an emo is? When I refer to my poetry being "emo" I'm talking about the general tone or feeling to ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Albany's Snakes
Albany's Snakes They're creepin' they're crawlin' all over us and the town, city, state, and they don't care because they took "The world is your oyster" a little to literally ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me
I agree with some people: it's definitely not what I would call "poetic". But I think that it's originality and they way with's written, kinda broken up and switching to ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Poem
I would call it "Life's Meaning." I liked it...I can see why it won first place.
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: nvm 5
Like the review above ^^ it does havea rather 'telling' quality, and there's quite a lot of it. Some of the low has issues, but I like it. It has ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Roma and Julius
It was so cute! Yeah, like the others there were some issues with the rhythm, but if you added a couple words here or there, it's perfect. Love it!
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Jump (this Routine's Deadly)
Here's my song...title's debatable, but this is the one that best fits. Feel free to comment with a name change, I'll take them all under consideration. No set music, but ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: ...Hello?
Hi, I'm Meg. I wrote a bit in the Welcome thread that the Jack dude started, but Hi! I like writing, but some people don't like my writings because most ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hello...I'm Nutmegan. I'll respond to pretty much anything with the base of "Meg"...Nutmeg, Megan (although my real name is simply Meg), Meggie, Meggles, Mahogany. Long history behind Mahogany. Anyway
Jan 2, 2009
