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I do write everyday. Even if only one sentence or two.

I accept any criticisms, don't hold back. I know it may be slightly confusing and I'm not sure whether anyone apart from me will find it romantic. In a time ...

I loved this! I didn't find the repetition annoying at all. In fact, I found it really funny. Tom's thoughts were great! XD The beginning was very, very good, it ...

A few mistakes which need correcting: The music blared away, melting in [Don't need in] with the drunken calls and horribly off-key singing so prevalent at night clubs, especially Full ...

I agree with the others on how the chapter lacked a little bit. I think adding another paragraph would've helped a lot. I also think that the text conversation was ...

I really liked it! Although, I think you used the word 'he' way too much when talking about Micah. group of three boys walked across the courtyard and came inside. ...

This chapter is pretty long as I added a bit at the end. Since I edited it a bit it seems quite fidgety. I welcome critiques gladly! Edit: I shortened ...

I think I'll start by nit-picking a little. I know it can be annoying but it will help you improve! Then I'll proceed to give you my own opinions on ...

[Bear in mind; I never, ever write romance and any attempts I make often fail. However, I chose Corrine and the only genre that came to mind was romance, critiques ...

Haha, that's pretty funny. Thanks, again!

Must of been a dodgy website... XD Wow, never thought someone would actually know first-hand about this...thanks, it's pretty useful. Heh...I don;t think the characters in the van would mind ...

So, the area is 300 sq ft, that means that 150 people can fit in there under really squashed conditions?

Metronomy!!! Absolutely LOVE them. Arctic Monkeys Love them, too. The Wombats Phoenix Frightened Rabbit Vampire Weekend Neon Plastix Bloc party

XD I mean, how many people can you fit INTO a removal van.

Never, sometimes I conjure up situations for them but they never TALK to me. I wish they would, though, I am curious as to what they'd say...