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Just want to say: I'm obviously going to be having many more drafts after this and posting this up will help me rewrite. I understand there's probably quite a lot ...

[Bear in mind; I never, ever write romance and any attempts I make often fail. However, I chose Corrine and the only genre that came to mind was romance, critiques ...

This chapter is pretty long as I added a bit at the end. Since I edited it a bit it seems quite fidgety. I welcome critiques gladly!Edit: I shortened it. ...

I accept any criticisms, don't hold back. I know it may be slightly confusing and I'm not sure whether anyone apart from me will find it a time of great ...