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Re: Soul?
Oh, rhiannon, I would not forget you name, Even if the apolocalypse came. I'd still shout it high, into the hills, As if i didnt, it would be my kill. ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: her heart will bleed
Nice little poem you've got here, but it kinda dies half way through :/ She is alone, Although she is not She is unknown Though no one has forgot The ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Cicada
strangely troubled, young as fire, sacrificed unto desire; I really like this line! It creates such vivid imagery into my mind and create an amazing mix of fire and darkness ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: A Beautiful Ballerina
Very pleasent poem! :) I do love haiku, and I've never seen anyone use it for a ballerina, so well done! This is a great poem, and created a great ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: This Lie
Hmm, this poem does make me wonder what the poem is exactly about. The way it's set out does not blend well while reading it, as the amount of syllables ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Mr.Weed.
WOAH! Thanks for all the review's guys! Aha, I'm always getting told off for not capatalizing my /I/'s! Oh, poop. Sorry about the spelling mistake on 'innevitable' should've been 'inevitable' ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Soul?
Thank you both very much for the reviews. After looking over my piece (I didnt even edit it before i uploaded it :xd:) You are totally right about the word ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Mr.Weed.
I paint my tears, upon the root, to make me grow such fine fruit. Lick the sun, ravish the earth, Gorge myself, for all my worth. I am a flower, ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: A Bed of Roses
This is just brilliant. :) Its a little sad, but it really rings home with my personal situations as well! The last two lines: "For, how can anything last when ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Soul?
This is just a little block I wrote. Its not very good, but totally combines my feelings at the moment, and it makes me feel better to write it. Call ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Iambic pentametre - attempt D:
Bwhahahaha, I did this lesson :) Obviosuly i didn't do the task as I do not remeber this! :lol: Anyway, 'mazing job Rhi! :D ALSO, SACRALIDGE YOU SPATULA!!!! :xd: You ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: This is no longer a poem
Regarding navita's review, mine is going to be rather pitiful :lol: Anyway, I really like this poem, it rathers twists your eyes a little, which makes you laugh at the ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Some people live for pain.
:) Nice poem Silent! Yet, the whole maths thing is fun and all, but it deploys a certain sense of 'childishness' with primary school english lessons. Of course you do ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter One (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
:) Hiya Golden. You know me, I'm not one for long reviews, so ill make it short and snappy. Like a midget crocodile... XD This is absoloutly amazing and I ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: a tapestry of textures
:) I forgot the specific name of the 'volcano-thingy' :lol: ...BUT, it looks like that castle that shot that green light out of the top in Lord Of The Rings? ...
Apr 18, 2010
