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Hello Mr.Helium, You float so very high, Up into the burning blue sky, yet don't understand why. You hit your head On the shining stars, On some satellite, Reddened by ...

I'll call you lily :xd: Anywho, this is a fairly decent poem, but the decent level is what you'd find on a sort of birthday card, just a very depressing ...

1) If I painted a picture of your heart (, needed here) it would be so blue (tell us what this signifies.) but I would already know that ( , ...

Aha, i do love you rhi. So, so, very much... ...

I have you biggot XD

WELL YOU DONT ACT LIKE YOU WAS FIRST DO YOU! XD If you already knew it, then why dont you implent the rules into your YWSoul. :D Geezus. I critize ...

IF YOU EVER WANT A MASS OF REVIEWERS, YOU HAVE TO GET YOUR RATION OF REVIEWS PER PIECE TO AT LEAST 3:1, AND TRY TO GET THE TWO STARS, YOUR ...

This is a really good poem! :D My favourite poem out of the ones you have done. :) Yet theres a two lines that sound a bit iffy :/ But ...

-rubs out corner- :D

Really good poem! I see the way you've structured it, you're trying to make one continuous paragraph instead of breaking it down, which is really good, yet, not so well ...

Oh, stop ya winging! XD

Okiedokie, Canis :D Thanks Alot. AND it could be It's. IT'S up to the personal prefrence :P

Aww! :) and yes, I finally write a happy one. AND DAMN YOU! THE WHOLE YWS DOESNT NEED TO KNOW WHO I LIKE O>>_

Haha :) Yeah, swish a hair. you know... slightly off someones cheek? XD :) I was saying Its We as a statement. Not a proclomation. Of course it doesn't really ...

Here's a little something I write while thinking about someone. It's not very good compared to some stuff I do, but... its literal therapy :P Golden sea. Of soul and ...