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Whoa, haven't been on here for months! Got to get back on the band wagon, haha; Here's a little something, a first part in a sequence of poems i've made. ...

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Hi there. Funnily enough, I do really like this poem. It's simplicty really hits home, and delivers your opinion on 'love'. What is love but a word? An overused phrase? ...

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Hello. I wont go through the poem throughly, as the above reviewer already has done. This is a good poem, but it could be great. Punctuation is your friend, and ...

Rage, pounding, thoughts hounding, Screaming, hurling, hatred swirling. -Very good first group of lines. Fast and it flows, which gets you straight into the rhythm of the poem. You get ...

Thank you for the comments. With the comment on the poem feeling empty and not going nowhere, I totally understand; I wanted it to feel that way, to mimic how ...

a man lied on a bench memories rippled the canal rippled his bottle of gin hugged his smokers cough and embraced his heavy sigh. Memories tied him to life with ...

This is a fairly okay poem. I understand that 'truth' is what the theme of the poem is, but... you don't need to CONSTANTLY repeat it. this makes the poem ...

This is really good! The contrast of bad and good is really powerful along with outlining the obvious dangers. I also liked the little touch of making the last two ...

This is quietly powerful. It's bring the thought of, is love really love, to the boil. When I started to read it, I thought it was gonna be another poem ...

Can you feel that static? running through the yellow grass, cut ever so close. The clouds grimace at me, almost; Because they know your the one shocks me. An apple ...

Good day. After looking over your poem i do have to say that im not very fond of it, nor does it show a whole lot of literal OR artistic ...