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I think you commented on some of my stuff so i'll coment on yours- This was awesome and so original and i like originality. (is that even a word? well ...

A frown is reflected in a broken-hearted, teenage mothers eye. My differences rejected in this facist country's sullen sigh. With all the same old features. pick your coulor, choose your ...

He's the great big leather bear hug. He sends shivers up my spine. Strictly chridtian rocker, Makes me so nervous every time He has a golden baby mustache, some acne ...

The orange streetlamps highlight the rain as another teenage gay cries in pain, On the corner where the drunks lie. They beat him up, they called him names, he tries ...

Surrounded by memories of you, As i ask myself if my feelings Could be unreal or untrue. Twisted by love again, And i just can't decide, How many times to ...

nice one i agree with everyone else... you rock lol. this was just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :P

i was three and nearly four, and i read a beutiful book called Mimis dream house, it was about a mouse who wanted a house. it was always my fave ...

When the tears fill my eyes And a sharp pain picks my throat 'Cos I dont want him to see my fear Could i lean on your shoulder, As my ...

try changing some thing about and replacing knall in some places i sense his/her name is being used alot. also ive read a few of your other chapters and they ...

nice! this rocked even for a first draft. but keep at it and maybe change some words to better words.

this is sweet and i loved the 'seeing a void' bit. its just totally unique. i'd say something about commas and stuff like that but im not too good with ...

You smile in hope to make a conversation and I stride on, but deep inside I want you, somehow,somewhere, and maybe, if you want me too just take me! please ...

interesting... its great that you find beuty in everyone. somehow you remind me of my brother, a broad-minded rasta.

NICE! i really really like it. espesially the second stanza.

well , i think there should be some editing but dont know were. please leave comments! chandra- a thick black ankle in the sand, and pink splotches on your hands' ...