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I just noticed, in the second line the word hi should be written like: "Hi" as it is a quote of what you said. xx

I think this is good. You've used some good imagery, although I find the point of the poem a bit to clear for my likings, although thats only my oppinion.

Its about my ex-boyfriend who was a total a-hole... yeh and whenever he told me he got this girl pregnant, i felt i couldnt trust him. then i discovered he ...

Munching on cashews, trying hard to concentrate. Pink hair veis my eye. Drinking herbal tea, Writing a double haiku. A willo tea cup.

A prozac-like smile That could stretch about a mile Greeted me in my own house 'Hello!' he beamed As he popped out from behind the door My mind giggled happily ...

awesome! no-one really writes poetry like this no more. they all write about people dying and breaking up with their boyfriend etc. i really like this!

this was really cool. lest? i've never heard of that word but shall look it up as i dont think someone would just write a word they made up lol. ...

i like it, its so unique. hope you eep writing! M!M! :D

Blushed in embarressment (did i spell it right?)

this is great i like!

i like it alot. nothing else to say. someoone else noticed unctuation errors but i wouldnt really know about that so yeah. good. keep it up.

i like! mabye you could add a bit more detail as its so short

The first stanza wasn't really so interesting in my oppinion but the rest- WONDERFUL! i like this. Mimi

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hope you keep posting!

Hey! You must be new to YWS and mabye you're new to the whole poetry writing thing. I dont want to sound snobby but i started writing poetry when i ...