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Not if it's a cold one. Do I exist?

Hi, Gwendolen! Welcome to YWS! Don't forget the 2:1 policy - make sure to do 2 reviews for every 1 piece of writing that you post. I like this. The ...

Hi, GreatEscape. He only went inside the café because it was the first place he’d spotted where he could smoke inside . It was raining outside and he wanted warm ...

I've watched the movies, but I could never finish pride & prejudice.

I just look at it and think, "Didn't you mean to type 'scarf'?" But other than that, it sounds like a fantasy story, so I probably wouldn't read it. Thick ...

"One smile that cheers you, One face that lights when it nears you. ... Love is the answer, Someone to love is the answer. Once you've found her, Build your ...

I have to admit, I usually have a very cheap taste in books. I frequent the "Teen" section of the library. But I'm trying to become more classy in my ...

This is really lovely, Eraqio. Reminds me of Annabel Lee by Poe. I like the rhyme. They found her face down in the water, peaceful as can be, but none ...

a chubby mermaid. nixonblitzen

6/10 Uhn. I don't really want to continue reading because it seems like it'll throw me into something I don't understand and it'll be seven pages before it makes any ...

I liked it. Maybe 6/10? Maybe 7? I don't think you should use "always" twice in the second sentence, and I don't think you use the semicolon correctly. Maybe it's ...

Wow, Krupp's right! A poem that has a rhyme scheme and an actual rhythm? That is a rarity. So well done, just for that. I have to say I don't ...

Dear Raimunda, These are really quite lovely. As nonsensical as ever I could have hoped. The first three near perfection. I guess I could nitpick and ask, what does it ...

Do you really want your innermost thoughts and feelings critiqued? Well, I'll just say a few things. Obviously, this had a very intimate, spoken type of feel. Like a stream ...

Hello, fluteluvr. And yet, so many memories Have been made I don't like the passive voice here. There’s so much to thank for It’s hard to think of it all ...