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...maya angelou wrote this.

Don't erase anything off your computer or throw anything out, no matter how bad it seems. You're going to want it when you're old and grey! Don't leave YWS! You ...

I like this poem. Why do I stop being me, If it’s me in love why do you see someone else? Punctuation: First line should end in a question mark, ...

Anna, I have to say I love this. The personification of Silence is surprising and pleasant to the reader & I like the language you use. I became somewhat wary ...

well hello there. i like this quite a bit. it's really disturbing to me, but in a nice catharsis-type literary way. Some nitpicks: As I stand and watch your tears ...

unintended, i assure you.

I wrote this as a creative writing assignment last year. We were supposed to compose poems from words and phrases found in magazines. Falling Hard... Baby, it's cold outside. Miss ...

Do you draw political cartoons for fun? Amazing! Well done.

Wow. Really beautiful and kind of bizarre in a lovely way. I want to be in this setting. Let’s make a nest in the sun amongst the tall grasses towering ...

well now, these crits above me are rather nasty, now aren't they? Okay, I just did some research on halo. master chief is the main character, and the brute chieftain ...

I'm reallllllllly shy, so I have never posted an "about me." but here goes, i guess... 1. I'm real bad at talking, as shown by the subject line. Honestly, I'll ...

This is really interesting. You have great ideas! Once I had to write a descriptive paper about cowardice. It's really hard to think up good metaphors, but I like it. ...

I really like this. I like the relationship of the two stanzas. It's an experience for the reader. It demands a second reading, and that is a very good quality. ...

For Rosey Unicorn's Elements of Nature Contest His eyes are colorless, Like the sky that threatens to rain, But never does. When he smiles It is like the soft, grey ...

I love this so much that I'm almost beside myself. The images are beautiful. I think it has some problems, but every suggestion I come up with would take away ...