ninja-Z

:D great! There are once again a few mistakes I picked up. letting fall to the newspaper strewn ground . This should say: letting it fall to the newspaper strewn ...

nice description!!! yeah. "knuckled" should be "knuckles", and "a shimmering shards of light " should be either "shimmering shards of light"or "a shimmering shard of light". :( Overall, very realistic

hm.. we shall see how this turns out, but it sounds good :D

ok thats ok i like opinion, though cere doesnt have money cause hes a tech genious he can fly a ship because he is a tech genious :)

kitty15: a 14-yr old is strong enough to drive a car, why not a ship? and Cere is a tech genious. gaswas, the currency in the almega galaxy, is diff ...

thank you I'm glad that you liked it jabber and tim :)

The Almega Galaxy: Corruption Chapter 1: The Rough Start It was early summer when thirteen-year-old Kwest Omarrin of Zorrac received his report card." “Hmmm…..Numbers II: three out of five. Techni

:D a new and good addition to the SW universe!

ok im new..i feel confident and have already begun part 1! :D

jabber yes this is related to timea s books in fact when this series ends, timeas series begins...... :)

Hi this is ninja-Z(Zoltan) bringing you an all new adventure series! It takes place 8BBA(eight yrs. before the battle of Asmacore), and is in the galaxy me and my sister, ...

:D hi i am Zoltan known as ninja-Z! i am a happy person, and i like star wars and naruto

i read the beginning its good. 'the emperors black bones' was quite creative and it has a fairly good plot setup.

nice job its coming along nicely! of course i helped.....