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wow i didn't think so many people would care about my one poem :) thank you all! your critiques are helpful, for the most part. maybe i'll start paying more ...

Chapter 3: New Beginnings Three Months Later “Dingdingdingdingding.” This was the sound that came from Kwest’s alarm on his holoscreen. From the top of the object the time was projected ...

a purple heart is an award that an american gets if he is wounded on the battlefield :) sorry for the confusion; i forgot that you guys from the UK ...

this is pretty good ....got me in a poetry mood :D i like how its short it leaves you questioning and pondering. who/what were you thinking of when you wrote ...

thats pretty funny..weird, but funny

im no baby, you idiot! do babies write novels and poems? didn't think so_

~American Warrior~ Have you ever witnessed the American wars? Have you crossed the seas to seek other shores? Have you carried a Purple Heart, so bravely, so proud? Have you ...

wow thats okay. this reminded me: a long time ago, i wrote a poem, and i think it got into the newspaper. i think i'll post it :D

its the first poetry on yws i've read and it looks good. jared told me bout you; said you wrote good stuff. i agree a little about what he wrote ...

yeah what dynamo said : finally your bringing the whole of the leaf village into the picture. one mistake, though: They held onto the dragon’s neck spines as they were ...

yes, she's my sis... :backtotopic: but I don't try to rush to the 'good stuff' really. this chapter and the next are just setting up the story. its mucho more ...

man you did your research...really. a little weird with the whole testicles thing, in my opinion. but the end action was good, and the whole thing somewhat realistic. scary, yet ...

just wanna say part 3 is longer and taking thought so sorry. thanks to all who posted! 8) oh tim quit that licky thing thats a weird smilie... ~gotta work ...

i usually do about 1, 2, maybe even three every day. for some reason, though, my thing that says my reviews has been stationary for the most part....

i said action/pace, but i pretty much stink at everything other than that, thats why i said it. well, im just starting... :) Z_