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a Terrible Laugh a Terrible Boom a Terrible Silence a heavy footprint heavy breathing fist clenched on His Hammer only one human left striding with purpose striding to His Death ...

:) wow that is so powerful that I cannot grasp or understand it! hmm...please, if you can, mail me an explanation, though I don't require one. I liked the flow ...

CHAPTER FOUR 11 hours 25 minutes, March 10, 2537 Planet Beckon, Covenant capital ship Divine Kinship Epsilon Omicron system_ He could feel the spike as it went through his chest. ...

PART ONE: CHASING SHADOWS Chapter 3 8 hours 50 minutes, March 10, 2537 Planet Beckon, small Covenant outpost Epsilon Omicron system_ Luke slammed the butt of his MA5 Assault Rifle ...

wow...you REALLY need to rework this. I'm just gonna rewrite the WHOLE thing, because almost every sentence is missing a little something... Chapter 1 The Hard Assault(capitalize the title) “Go ...

wow that was extremely good vocabulary :P and it capture the scene perfectly. i dont much like your combination of rhyme and non-rhyme, but thats just my opinion.

Republic Commando: [Tipping Point] Prologue "So they all wonder, why me? Each of them could have had a normal childood, but instead fate had them training for war their whole ...

That was really good. I sniffed out an error: IWho truly are we? other than that, it was good :) it reminds me of Neon Genesis Evangelion, if you've ever ...

i agree with Misinterpreted (i think was was his/her name) i also believe that the first few lines seem a little clished(clee-shade) hmm...overall, i think the poem started a little ...

There is no Peace there is only war and death and suffering and deceit and factions and destruction and the craving for power It's not a sense of impending doom, ...

This book is the sequel to Alex Rider: Stormbreaker. The series now has seven books in it. Anyway, the book follows the story of Alex Rider, fourteen-year-old spy for MI6. ...

that didnt really make me cry. but it was well written. i think you captured those kinds of feeling well :) .

PART ZERO: INTRODUCTION CHAPTER ONE 11 hours 24 minutes, March 7, 2537 Planet Beckon, UNSC military base Scarlet Epsilon Omicron system_ It was just before noon when Corporal Jacob Gibson ...

Okay, this is my first book review! here goes: The book single shard is about a orphaned Korean boy, Tree-ear, living with another homeless man, Crane-man. They live under a ...

Halo: THE FIGHT WORTH FIGHTING -prologue 6 hours 40 minutes (approx.), March 4, 2537 Planet Beckon, Epsilon Omicron system_ “Sergeant, what are our orders?” Corporal Gibson yelled into his helmet�