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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: young writer's diary:episode 1

    Thank you very much for your oppinion, I will try to correct everything in the next episode. Excuse me for my mistakes as I am not an english, I am ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Memories of Autumn

    "Between the dazzling leaves of autumn So many that I barely see the path So many that my eyes lack the mouth I’ve lost myself in the colors of autumn..." ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: a rose for the abused..

    Tha last words took my breath away....it's really worth reading, though there are some moments, that do not sound as they are supposed to, but all in all it is ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Summer of the Beginning of Our Lives

    I agree with the previous oppinion: you use a very good vocabulary, but here I can see idea, and idea is not formed. It's like when an architects looks at ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Student of the Night

    You know your describtions are so definite and complete that the reader (that is to say me) is completely taken away by the smells, tastes, scenes... While reading i really ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: young writer's diary:episode 1

    Hey there!!! Thank you very much for your words, you can't even imagine how much I needed somebody to comment on my work as i thought that I should not ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: young writer's diary:episode 1

    Water can be very tasty when you are 16. Especially at 2:45 p.m. Especially when you are staring at the ceiling for nearly half an hour. It’s Christmas time: “Merry ...

    Jan 9, 2010


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman