nightshine

i thought it was very good. i enjoyed it. it kind of reminded me of some other stories i read though i dont see that many dragon stories in this ...

chapter 2 Thousands of miles away, in a secret military base almost as well hidden as Area 51, a small man walked into a big conference room. The room was ...

i loved it. really great story and its very well written. i would love to see a full-length version of this story. i hope this isnt all your going to ...

nice story. i liked it. but there are some things i would like to address, such as: Mr. Rodgers - whaaaaaaaaaat!? isnt he the guy with that little kid show? ...

ok ok ok so most people think these vids are stupid and you may have heard of them already but oh well i think they're awesome so yeah they have ...

I loved it! I really enjoy reading books that take place around this time period. It reminds me of a bunch of other books I've read though it has a ...

wow very good! very original. you have a very nice style of writing and I look forward to reading more in the future

very cool! very nice. I agree this is the best character outline i've ever seen. very thorough. by the time you finish this, you'll know the character better than you ...

chapter 1 "The first day of school." I said quietly to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old eighth ...

i loved it! really addicting. i think the pacing is very good and by the looks of it you've probably gone over this many times before posting it. as for ...

wow. i really got hooked! very catchy. im a little anxious to see what was going on with the strange reflection in the mirror and about when she blacked out ...

woah! really good. i liked it. very original! keep it up.

thank you everybody! thank you so much. i really dont want anybody to hold back at all. i want your full opinions. so thank you for letting me know what ...

very good. i liked it. though some parts were strangely written and a little confusing. i did catch on to all those unusual names. (especially Toast =]) that was another ...

chapter 1 THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL. I thought to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old eigth grade ...